Juniper

This poem is a free form poem. I was thinking of how evil society can be (a la The Phantom of The Opera), so forgive me if it sounds a ...

(Hey there! I just stumbled upon your poem and thought Ishould review/critique it) Sewers run red with blood. Un-speakable evil’s walk the street. (No hyphenating 'unspeakable'; no apostrophe in evi

Welcome Alex! Good to see another awesome member around here! Wow, you're from New South Wales? How cool! One of my good friends live there now. I'm jealous of the ...

The colours run into each other Stains of paint and orange juice on my summer dress. (This makes me think of a happy summer day; everything is smiling and happy ...

3 not-really-connected poems. They were too short to post as seperate ones though. Feeback appreciated. 1. Dresser At night I lay them out, each ribbon touched by so many thumbs, ...

(Hey there! I'm June and I'm going to be your critiquer today. When posting something for some one else to review, it's slightly better to leave off adding your notes, ...

[s] I'm terribly amateur-ish at poetry, being a beginner. Feel free to tear apart.[/s] Stop saying that :lol: it's far from true. ______ Forgetting all other things I take to ...

We draw thick outlines, try to make the colours suit. Base them on our sisters, mothers, future daughters. Cut out the crayon mouths, create the hands that hold the Ring ...

Explosion at the Glitter Factory They told us to look away from the flames, to ignore showering silver and mandarin green settling on our eyelashes. But we didn’t. Instead we ...

But Clo! He was blaming the explosion on the cricket, and his expression was absolutely the cutest!! Anyways, banned for having a quote by someone I've never heard of before ...

Haha Andy, in the first picture if you notice, she is swatting at the camera with her paw. The blur was caused by her moving, not me unsteadily holding the ...

Birds

Welcome Ethan! You made the right choice to follow the white rabbit. Welcome aboard! Well, basically all you have to do is participate. You'll love it here! We have a ...

I don't know. Banned for staying up so late. Night!

Wow Frank!! These are genius! I love the first one! It's great, I wouldn't change anything about it. The second is really, really good. I'm not so wild about the ...