Juniper

Zehra! I haven't read anything of yours in ages. This is pretty! First it is silent, the dust blows over the land in great threads, then she comes and spins ...

Ammieyaz, It's fabulous to read some of your poetry again! You've improved. :) Did all of the critiques make you want to write more? Silence dominates the song, reminiscent of ...

Amber! I love it! Excellently done! I agree with Shauni on saying that the neck could use some shading where the hair falls, and perhaps just a little on the ...

Hullo, Hawk! This is cute. The problem, is, though, you should narrate every step like "I pull out my book"; these narrative phrases hold your poem back from reaching its ...

Hallo, Knightley! Have I ever mentioned that I like reading what you write? I mean, I don't know... it's odd. Some people can write stuff that I enjoy reading because ...

Hullo! I decent start, I believe. I think the theme's a little overused in a sense that love poems are so, so, so common and tend to not give us ...

Hallo, Lydia! I think this is good. Short, concise, to the point. In that respect, I think it's good! As Angel says, it breathes things that many people know and ...

Hey there, Angel! I agree with Matt; there's a little bit too much punctuation going on here, and it makes this not only difficult to follow, but difficult to appreciate, ...

Hello! Aside from the structural parts of this poem that may not hit the spot, I think it'd be beneficial to elaborate on what you're saying here. There's not enough ...

Hi, Munchkinizzle, I believe this is a good place to start a poem, but there are things I don't really like about this. To begin, the narrative of it became ...

Hallo, Kammie! Whipping the flame of your curls to capture vagabonds in your tangled thoughts. Flame of your curls is an interesting image. Something about this wording is off kilter, ...

Happy birthday, Meshugenah! (Now might be a good time to make some old-woman jokes, but, uh, I think you may still be kid-sized, maybe?)

Hullo, there! I think this is a decent place to begin a poem, but in my opinion, it needs some work done. :) To begin, don't place emphasis on words ...

Hi, Kaywiia! This poem's got potential (lots of it), and I think you need to make it shine. In the summer skies A glow begins to appear The sun is ...

Hullo, Ette! Okay, so, I like this poem, because it's simple, and pretty in some ways. Of course, I have my nitpicky things I don't like about it, haha, but ...