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Re: Down in the State of Georgia
Hey Bear! A poem by you! Yay! Pft, push all comments about being not being a poet aside, this was good. So, I think this should have been written as ...
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: My Town
Hey there Witch! As niteowl said, the concept behind this was great, but it could be a little better if you worked on the formatting. As you said, it would ...
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: I Want You Back
Hey Bailey! Remember to be careful about posting your full real name on the net. Can be dangerous, dear. Now! Onto the review! It was a good poem, slightly cliche, ...
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: Forgotten
Hey there Nickelodeon! This was good! I liked it! The lines were short and simple, nothing too overdone here. I think somethings could be tweaked a little, but I think ...
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: Stop!
I concur Clo. *nods*
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: There are no men on Young Writers Society!
Sock, dear, are you feeling okay? XD Haha, I'm not being negative to guys, but if a lot of guys can't write, don't you prefer that the ones who can't ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Legend's Hollow
This is for CastleInTheSky's contest. I use picture 8 of the little girl, but I changed the age I hope that's okay. (Hey there Peanut! June here! Forgive me if ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: He Wasn't Too Old For Her
Hey there, June here! That was a very good read. I absolutely loved it. It was perfectly written and brilliant. The only nitpick I have is when you put the ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: 1500 Points Up for Grabs
Uh... this is... kind of weird, don't you think? XD Do we have to give the name of the person?
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Empire
(Hey there Evan! June here! I'm going to review your poem for you now :).) All you people sitting up high, wondering what poor person to make cry. Very good ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: The path
Hey there Darko! June here, and I shall review this for you today. So, this is called "path of casts", but as we read through the poem, it almost tells ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Letters to the earth
(Hey there Expiring, I'm June and I'm going to review this for you :)) Submit me your voices, your legend, Where the God of ancient pillars, Crumbling red stone from ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: June's review thread
*triumphant music* I'm done! I have finished all of your reviews and I am now awaiting lots more :). Keep them coming!
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Liana Unbroken
(Hey there Kaylyn! June here! I'm going to review this for you :). I hope I'm not too harsh on you :). ) Raiyne sprinted through the city. Whitewasher towers ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: The Scribe
(Hey there! June here, and I'm going to be reviewing this for you. Pardon my rusty skills, and I hope I'm not too harsh.) Calon awoke to the sudden feeling ...
Dec 25, 2008
