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Juniper

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Down in the State of Georgia

    Hey Bear! A poem by you! Yay! Pft, push all comments about being not being a poet aside, this was good. So, I think this should have been written as ...

    Dec 27, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: My Town

    Hey there Witch! As niteowl said, the concept behind this was great, but it could be a little better if you worked on the formatting. As you said, it would ...

    Dec 27, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: I Want You Back

    Hey Bailey! Remember to be careful about posting your full real name on the net. Can be dangerous, dear. Now! Onto the review! It was a good poem, slightly cliche, ...

    Dec 27, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Forgotten

    Hey there Nickelodeon! This was good! I liked it! The lines were short and simple, nothing too overdone here. I think somethings could be tweaked a little, but I think ...

    Dec 27, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Stop!

    I concur Clo. *nods*

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: There are no men on Young Writers Society!

    Sock, dear, are you feeling okay? XD Haha, I'm not being negative to guys, but if a lot of guys can't write, don't you prefer that the ones who can't ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Legend's Hollow

    This is for CastleInTheSky's contest. I use picture 8 of the little girl, but I changed the age I hope that's okay. (Hey there Peanut! June here! Forgive me if ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: He Wasn't Too Old For Her

    Hey there, June here! That was a very good read. I absolutely loved it. It was perfectly written and brilliant. The only nitpick I have is when you put the ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: 1500 Points Up for Grabs

    Uh... this is... kind of weird, don't you think? XD Do we have to give the name of the person?

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Empire

    (Hey there Evan! June here! I'm going to review your poem for you now :).) All you people sitting up high, wondering what poor person to make cry. Very good ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The path

    Hey there Darko! June here, and I shall review this for you today. So, this is called "path of casts", but as we read through the poem, it almost tells ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Letters to the earth

    (Hey there Expiring, I'm June and I'm going to review this for you :)) Submit me your voices, your legend, Where the God of ancient pillars, Crumbling red stone from ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: June's review thread

    *triumphant music* I'm done! I have finished all of your reviews and I am now awaiting lots more :). Keep them coming!

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Liana Unbroken

    (Hey there Kaylyn! June here! I'm going to review this for you :). I hope I'm not too harsh on you :). ) Raiyne sprinted through the city. Whitewasher towers ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Scribe

    (Hey there! June here, and I'm going to be reviewing this for you. Pardon my rusty skills, and I hope I'm not too harsh.) Calon awoke to the sudden feeling ...

    Dec 25, 2008


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