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Re: [deleted]
It's not quite a story and it's not quite non-fiction, so I decided to post here. Some of you will know what I'm referring to and some of you won't. ...
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Re: Preface to Passionfire
This is just a preface to a story. It isn't very long, but please let me know what you think :D (Hey there Tierra! I'm June and I am going ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Do You Have What It Takes To Join YWS' Most Exclusive Club?
Whoa. Guys, speed up! I did 20 reviews in 24 hours. Oh gosh, that sounds so geeky. But yeah, so at that rate. I'll be there soon. No need to ...
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Re: Lost With You
Hey there JCP! Welcome to YWS! We have a 2:1 policy here which means that for every one piece of work you post you should have completed two reviews. Try ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Do You Have What It Takes To Join YWS' Most Exclusive Club?
You know, I really thought that I was going to lay off on the critiques after the first, but I changed my mind. It's not important to me to be ...
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Re: The Cottage
Hey there! June here! So! Everyone else has basically covered your grammar issues that lay up there, so I won't do the broken record move and repeat them. Instead, I'll ...
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Re: Truckly Views
Hey Via! Good poem! You drew me in and didn't disappoint. It's halfway a bit hard to understand, but I'm tired at the moment, so when I "wake up" I'll ...
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Re: Shift
(Hey there Stori! June here :)) Whatever else happened, I was thoroughly sick of "being" Terrence Rayne. I shifted back to my real form and breathed a sigh. No offense, ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Sanctum Needs You
I keep getting weird pop up alerts on sanctum o.O
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Themed Chat Night (30/12/2008 10:00pm GMT)
I are the bridesmaid, remember!
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: The Prayer of the Wishes
Hey there Dragnet! June here! I'm going to review this for you. It was short, so there's nott much to touch on structure wise, but this reminds me of something ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Themed Chat Night (30/12/2008 10:00pm GMT)
Psh. Never doubt Jared's ability to do something Peanut. He can, and will do it.
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: Christmas Skates&More
Hey again! Yay! More pictures! Very good! I loved the composition on each of them Very well done! The grey and white photo of the skate is well done; much ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: Christmas Skates&More
Hey! A couple?!? WAA! It's only one! Anyway! Yay! An ice skate. I am totally a sucker for figure skating or any ice skating. Too bad I wrecked my knee ...
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Re: Emotions and Lights
Hey there Chupatoasta! First photo: I like the composition here! I think it should just be tweaked slightly to be a little straighter. Other than that, I think the clarity ...
Dec 28, 2008
