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Re: Winter Dust
Hey there Anti! June here! This is great! I thought I had reviewed this already, but I haven't, so here we go. The whole reading-down thing gives a very dramatic ...
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Re: Glass Castle
Hey there Shina! June here! You know me, so you know how nit-picky I am. I love tearing stuff apart, so pardon my mean-ness. Nothing personal. When reviewing, I try ...
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Re: Clouds.02
Hey there Jigs! June here! I thought I had reviewed this already. In fact, I have; My internet decided to quit and bribe me into thinking I submitted stuff often. ...
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Re: Never Coming Back (Punk Rock)
Hey there Lord Gluz! June here! This made me laugh, silly, you did a good job here. It's probably just the "Second person roars and screams" that is making this ...
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Re: Just Go
Hey there Kalliope! June here! From the title, Just Go , I was drawn in. I don't know why, it was a simple, two word phrase; nevertheless, I was pulled ...
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Re: Dushnavslok'v
Ygaron, no offense. I laughed when I read this. It made me laugh, out loud, uncontrollably. I couldn't help it. June here, by the way, and I can't really review ...
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Re: To Dream The Dreams of Others
Hey Cat! June here! First off! The title! "To Dream Others' Dream", doesn't suit. It sounds... confusing. So maybe change it to "To dream the dream of others"? Anyway! Onto ...
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Re: Pretty Faces
Hey there Dark Angel! June here! This poem made me feel so guilty. It speaks so much and certainly carries emotion. However: This belongs in other poetry; it's rather free ...
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Re: Paper Faces
Hey there! June here! Okay, this poem was good. I liked it alot; but the genre is off. Sadly, this isn't lyric poetry. Most often, Lyric poetry rhymes and can ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Montag
Hey there Evan! June here as promised! Seeing that you told me this is based on the book Fahrenheit 451, I understand where this is coming from. However, for someone ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Themed Chat Night (30/12/2008 10:00pm GMT)
Hmmm... Nah, if you have a date, then that's great. If you don't then, you can always grab a guy to dance with :). Hmm... presents are up to you. ...
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Re: The Afterlife Phenomenon (Preview)
Hey there! June here! I liked this piece, Andy. It was very well written and clear. I'd dying to know what caused her mother to get so upset here. The ...
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Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Luuuupe! Your outfit rocks!! Suz: It was her semi-formal dance thingy :lol: Singer: You are prettiful :)
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Do You Have What It Takes To Join YWS' Most Exclusive Club?
Yeah. Can we start maybe January 5th? Because I have to finish these 100 reviews, and write for the Lit journal and finish contest entries. and I have a zillion ...
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Re: Do You Have What It Takes To Join YWS' Most Exclusive Club?
Dreamer. We are totally racing for it.
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