Juniper

Hey, Kammieyaz! I'm going to agree with Kylan on the boardwalk that says that this is too still-life. It's like, almost as if you've paused a scene in Haiti and ...

Hello, there! This is interesting. :) I think that you begin on solid legs, and keep it up idealistically for the most part. I'd enjoy seeing a little bit of ...

Hey, Tim! This is interesting! I'm not so sure of the last stanza, because using "I want" is kind of hinting that you're lamenting your own life, and while the ...

Hello, there! In your title you have "Im finally me"; I just want to point out that you're using the contracted form of I am, so it should be I'm. ...

LeGasps! Happy birthday, my favorite Rainbow Robber!

Thanks, Pepper! You're the best! =D

Heylo! I love short poems. They're much easier to enjoy than some long ones, because they don't drone on for ages. I'm not so sure how much I like this ...

Hello! Interesting poem here! I think it's pretty neat how some of the lines serve as beginnings for one thought and the start of another. In some spots, that did ...

Haha, how awesome is that? I totally mistook her for a guy, haha. I think she needs eye lashes, right? Or something to make her look more feminine because her ...

Hello, there! This is cute! I like this poem for the most part, but the third line, "Started with the garden plow" seems a little bit like it doesn't fit. ...

Hello, Jon! The sky was • with rain that day You seem like you're missing an adjective, dear. Heavy, laden, blue, -- anything. It feels like there's a hole you ...

Hello, Lydia! Ooh, car crash! Exciting! I think the idea behind this poem is all good, cool stuff, but I think you do need to work on your execution of ...

Kyllorac! I had no idea you even wrote poetry. You seem like a novelist to me, haha. I like the rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem. It's effortless, and ...

Hullo, Telle! I like this song! I'd like to know how it's intended to be sang/what music it's intended to be set to. Some of the lines carried on longer ...

Hey, Eric! I fell in love with this poem. It's truly beautiful! Very simple and easy to appreciate. I love how it maintains its tone until the end. While I ...