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Re: Midsummer Night's Dream Part 1
Hey there, Dude! June here, as promised ^_^. Since I have a lot to read up on, I shall keep my reviews short and brief as possible, but I hope ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Panorama
A/N: A very, very cheesy poem, I know. I actually started writing this when I was twelve and because it was boring, I neglected it. I still don't like it, ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Panorama
A/N: Eh, this has to be my least favorite poem ever; it's unrhymed, unstructured, free formed and just overall ugly. It was intended to be about the city people who ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Panorama
A/N: This was "supposed" to be prose poetry, but I have no idea what it turned out as. Writing "mainstreet" as one uncapitalized word was entirely intentional. And! I hope ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Panorama
A/N: These poems are very rough quality. The hardest thing to write about for me is what I see all the time, so pardon the poor/lame quality of this all. ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: A.S.H.
Hey Jon! June here! Bravo! Another poem =D. Let's get to work! First stanza: I like the opening, "All of the emotions," it really opens the setting well and introduces ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Who else really doesn't care if all art is propaganda?
That sounds like a fabulous idea Snoinky XD.
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: A girl's pride
Hey there foxfire! June here! Yay! It's small enough to view xD. She's skinny, haha. But she is pretty and well drawn! Her left arm is not as defined as ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: There are no men on Young Writers Society!
xD this thread makes me laugh... ... and lately, lots of guys have joined this place :D
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: How do i create a poem?
Hey! I'm June, and I'm going to give you a brief lesson on poetry, and how I approach it. Poetry is not something you can learn simply in a matter ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: You know you love me!
Magadang Araw! Kamusta ka na? Pangalan June :D. [okay I can't continue in tagalog xD] Welcome to YWS! Seeing that mostly everyone has covered all of the rules we have ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Mostly Here to Critique
Hey there Orchestrate! I'm June! So very nice to meet you! Welcome to the wonderful lands of YWS. We're a crazy lot here, but we're nice and we don't bite. ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: my inner editor
Hey there Evan! June here! [and I am totally a "grammar/punctuation" Nazi :lol:] This is absolutely hilarious! I love it :D. It's the type of poem that deserves lots and ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: One Day
Hey again Jasmine! Nope, the highwayman isn't similar at all. It has a totally different theme, scheme and all, but when I read this, it somehow reminded me of it, ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: for some one,
Hey there Abby! Welcome to YWS, I'm June and I'm going to be your reviewer today :). We have a 2:1 policy here, which means that for every one piece ...
Jan 6, 2009
