Juniper

Jon-- This poem = perfect. Absolutely perfect. I mean, like, beyond perfect? It's so short, so simplistic, but yet it holds such a wonderous meaning. I never knew you could ...

Hola Psouth! June here again ^^. Perfect! Having this as your second chapter fits the first perfectly well. I hope you'll keep your chapters around this length in the future ...

Hey there Ech! Niiiiice! These are a lot better than the first ones :D. And so pretty, too! I think my favorite would be number 3. Also! Your features are ...

Hey there Shiney! (Yeah, I am totally going to call you that o.o or maybe not?) June here; your critic for the moment! This is perfect. When people are upset, ...

Bonjour Mystique Eyes! I'm June, and I will be your critic for right now. (By the way, I love your username! It's so cute) Okay, I love your title. When ...

Hello there Game, I'm June and I'm your critic for the moment. This is a great poem, no doubt. You have a perfect rhyme scheme (A,B,A,C) going here throughout the ...

I take thousands of pictures of cats, and draw millions of pictures of cars. It's a habit. Here's a sketch of my dream car, Mercedes CLS 500. I think this ...

Hello Ina! I'm June, and I'm your critic for now! I'm going to review this. This "wowed" me. I am completely impressed with your usage of words here. It's simple, ...

Hola there! June here! Wonderful! I have the honor of being your first critic (or critiquer as they say around here). Anyway! Seeing that I have already tortured it, I ...

A/N: I had a word limit on this. It's supposed to be a short essay for school, dramatically reflecting a real, recent, horrifying event. (I totally know how to make ...

I wasn't wrong, see!? It's slightly too big to see in some places, but overall it's good :D. I like how you did the nose :D. I think it's the ...

Yup, foxfire, they're both my cats :). The grey-and-white one is called "Mayy" and the little calico kitten is her kitten. We call her "tigerlily" or "Lily" for short. I'll ...

I agree with you Bear XD. He's weird. XD But at least it doesn't look bad *shrugs* *steals piano and awesomeriffic painting of violin* Gosh, Bear, you're TALL! :shock:

xD Silly by "it" I meant the balcony thing he was standing on. If he keeps his promises (I don't doubt that he will) he will certainly make a good ...

Yeah, Jigs, you were the ONLY one. Why else do you think they surrounded it with bulletproof glass? XD