Juniper

Hey there Dusty! I'm June, and I'm going to be your critic/instructor for the moment. I love the way you open your poem. A simple note; Dignity, fate, hope. I ...

Quick note to running_with_the _devil: profanity/swearing is not allowed outside of literature. Please, this is a child-friendly site. Watch the language.

'Rina! That shirt! It belongs in my closet. Seriously. And it's green-- a better reason why it belongs in my closet. :shock: You're cutting your hair!? Noes! Let it grow. ...

Hey there Telina! June here! Your username is so pretty! It sounds elegant :). Okay, I really liked this. It made me think. Almost every line in this poem is ...

Hey there Elements; June here! Because I reviewed your friends' piece, I wanted to review something of yours! I have absolutely no nitpicks or criticism for this piece. It was ...

Hey all, This is my friends story. I told her how great the site is, and she wanted to see herself. She is signing up soon, but i decided to ...

Thanks, pop :). It actually is based on something that happened; it's completely true.

To my best friend Lily That day, When I told you how stupid you were, and I said that you needed to grow up, and move on I didn't really ...

Hey there PG! June here! There's something about your poems that I absolutely love. I'm not sure what it is; but, everything I've read by you is just amazing. This ...

Hey there Myrcei! I'm June! Welcome to YWS and nice to meet you! You have such a cool username =). Now, onto the review! This is beautiful. I mean, extremely ...

Hey there Kylan! I never review anything of yours for various reasons. The main reason being that it's too good to receive reviews. Anyway, I love the way this is ...

Hey there Writer in Disguise! I'm June and I'm going to review/critique this for you today. I hope I'm not too harsh on you-- forgive me if I am. The ...

Hm, I wonder... if I was to fill in the entire space under the car with black would that do it justice? I mean, like, putting a shadow under the ...

Quick note: Should be rated R for F-word content.

Hey there Madel! So wonderful to meet you! I'm June =) Welcome to the wonderous lands of YWS! You are definitely more than welcome here. Let me just brief you ...