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Re: Nature Photos
Hi moonlight! I can't see the photos! Make sure you're using an image host website suck as photobucket or imageshack. I'd certainly love to review this when you post them! ...
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Re: The User Below You...
It depends. In the summer, no way. In the winter, yes way. TPBM Has never been to new york :P
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: My Summer Sunshine
Wow! This is perfect! This is beautiful! I love how you added the "shading" to this. Shading/Highlights-- whatever it's called :D. This has emotion in it! It captures the sunshiney ...
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Re: Well... it's a girl.
This is so cute! All flaws aside, it's perfect! It doesn't have to be precise or perfectly dimensioned. It's great as it is, very cartoonic and adorable! Can I color ...
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Re: Abandoned flower
Hi Shauni! June here! This is beautiful! The title fits it perfectly, and the colors stand out and contrast perfectly. Your camera hasn't missed a detail! At first, I didn't ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Random photographs
Wow! Impressive! The lecturer may have been right about some types of birds, but a professional photographer and teacher told me to practice with birds, since they are quick moving. ...
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Re: Hellfire - Rayne & Tyranny
Hey there, Rayne! June here! This is so cute! I wish I could draw as well as this! You did a really good job here! I like the pitch-blackness of ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: a futuristicaly themed computerized drawing
Hey there Voxina! June here! I never seem to review anything of yours, and I don't know why! *makes mental note to review more of your work* I'm not going ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: I Could Write a Poem for You
Hello Evi! June here! I hope we've spoken before? Because it feels like we have, and it feels like I owed you reviews? Either way, I haven't reviewed this, so ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: More
Bonjour, Sir! June here! Strange how I read this poem before and never noticed it was by you. I should have known... The repetition in this poem is perfect. It ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: There are no more children.
Hello Eraqio! I'm June, and I'm to be your critic for the moment. Poems like this, that are based upon something concrete and do not pose the subject too vaguely ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Unzipped; IV
Dearest Hannah, You have satisfied your audience. Not just satisfied them, you disappointedly satisfied them. We were urging for more conflict-- you gave it, and we wanted them to become ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Unzipped; III
Hi again, Hannah! June here :D Because this is so flawlessly written, I am going to be as nitpick-y as possible! Bzzzt. Bzzzt. Bzzzt. The purple cell phone vibrating on ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Unzipped; II
Hello Hannah! June here again, to run over this quickly :D. Once again, this chapter, like the first, is nearly flawless. To me, writing is often rhythmic, but sometimes the ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Unzipped; I
Hey there Hannah! June here! I am totally unreasonably late with this! I feel terribly guilty! Clo-dear has already touched on any possible errors that might have existed. The only ...
Feb 3, 2009
