Juniper

Hey there! To be blatantly honest, I generally don't like poems that rhyme and carry romantic themes because they come off as overdone or cliche. Here, I don't think you ...

Hello, there! Welcome to the magical lands of YWS (we're all out of unicorns, though). Seems as if you've already got a bit of criticism here. I'll keep mine brief, ...

Hey, Ahmed, Rhyme's not my strongest avenue in poetry, so I must admit that my judgement of this is partially clouded by the fact that it's hard for me to ...

Hey! This is so impressive! The shading of this is really breathtaking. How do you do it? The girl on the right looks like she's missing an arm, but otherwise, ...

Oh, wow. Your work always impresses me. This is so cool. I love how there are so many symbolic messages you can get from this. It's really good! How long ...

Heeeey! It's so good to see you back around here. Where have you been? You haven't been around in forever! This is good! As far as sketches go, I can't ...

Hello there! June here. :) Interesting method to begin a story in the middle of pending action! I quite like that approach, although it could be better executed if you ...

Hello, there! I have to admit, I'm confused! I don't know what happened, haha, in the first part, they had seemingly already departed, and here, they seem like they've gone ...

Hey there! Nice job done here. :) You have a nice writing style. I don't like the opening line, dear. I could just be being picky or whatever, but in ...

Hello! In honesty, I don't have much to say on this, because it's one of those stories that make me smile when I read it, because it's just guiltless humor. ...

Hey, there! Juneth here. :) So! This is a start! And, it's better than some starts that I've read this morning, but the only thing holding me back from saying ...

Hey! June bug here. The Sergeant gripped his rifle in a death grip. The repetition of grip bores me; "death grip" is sadly too flat a description, and I would ...

This is cute! And bittersweet in some ways. I really enjoyed the images you gave us, dear, but I felt that, in more places than one, you could connect the ...

Hi, Matt! The first thing that came to mind when I read this was a vampire. . . Anyway, I do think this poem is good. You have a good ...

Hey there! I have to say I don't like this as much as I should. I think that the images you're using of school are far too common, overused cliches ...