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Re: Back and Forth- Prologue
Hi there Elle Jay! June here :D. I figured I should review something of yours :D. Here we go! For if he stopped for even one second, there was a ...
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Re: Roomies! Episode 1
Hi there, I just want to point out that since you use some language in this piece, you should have a rating of PG-13 on this :). ** Honestly, I ...
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Re: The Enigma
Muahaha, I think I might also tell you what to draw. First I have to find something... *ponders*
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Re: Bananas
Hi there Gluz! June here! Okay! This was interesting! I'm not entirely sure what the focal point of this was-- I understand it's about bananas, but I'm wondering what the ...
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Re: Prototype World
Hi LilPau! I'm June, and I'm going to run o'er this for you :). I really like your opening line. The opening line of every piece has the most effect ...
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Re: The Enigma
Hi Pop! This is so cool! It's totally random, but very well drawn. I like these type of drawings where you have so much on one page, it's so much ...
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Re: -untitled- Preface
Hi there Heffa! Welcome to the wonderful lands of YWS! I'm June and I'm going to run over this for you quickly :). This is quite an interesting prologue. It's ...
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Re: Split personalities 2.2
Hi there! I'm June! I don't know if I've reviewed you before, but here we go: I was snapped out of my reverie by a [s] tap tap tap[/s] 1 ...
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Re: More Photographs
Wow! The first picture is great! I love the gradual color change from light to dark. It really gives a nice touch to the photo. The one of the feild ...
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Re: Photographs 2
Hey there! These were beautiful! I absolutely love the first one! The clarity in it is brilliant. I love the one with the spiderweb. Even with a Canon SLR, I ...
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Re: Sunsets
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm June! This was such a sweet, sad poem. I really like the emotion you're putting in this with words. One thing!: with onlya sliver ...
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Re: 95% of America
Hey there Flem! June here! Lately, I really like your poetry. The more I read it, the more I appreciate it. Contrary to what everyone else has said, I really ...
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Re: Towers
Hey there Dreamer! June here! I'm not sure if I've ever critiqued anything by you before aside from photography. Either way, I owe you a review :D. This was such ...
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Re: Flowery Fishbowl Poetry
Hey there Yoha! June here again! I really liked this piece! It has a gentle elegance to it, and flowed smoothly. I like the imagery that dances in this poem-- ...
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Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but it's refurbished and it crashes as soon as you touch it. Sorry xD I wish I could go to Michigan...
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