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Juniper

  • Fantasy Novels Re: Back and Forth- Prologue

    Hi there Elle Jay! June here :D. I figured I should review something of yours :D. Here we go! For if he stopped for even one second, there was a ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Roomies! Episode 1

    Hi there, I just want to point out that since you use some language in this piece, you should have a rating of PG-13 on this :). ** Honestly, I ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: The Enigma

    Muahaha, I think I might also tell you what to draw. First I have to find something... *ponders*

    Feb 5, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Bananas

    Hi there Gluz! June here! Okay! This was interesting! I'm not entirely sure what the focal point of this was-- I understand it's about bananas, but I'm wondering what the ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Prototype World

    Hi LilPau! I'm June, and I'm going to run o'er this for you :). I really like your opening line. The opening line of every piece has the most effect ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: The Enigma

    Hi Pop! This is so cool! It's totally random, but very well drawn. I like these type of drawings where you have so much on one page, it's so much ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: -untitled- Preface

    Hi there Heffa! Welcome to the wonderful lands of YWS! I'm June and I'm going to run over this for you quickly :). This is quite an interesting prologue. It's ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Split personalities 2.2

    Hi there! I'm June! I don't know if I've reviewed you before, but here we go: I was snapped out of my reverie by a [s] tap tap tap[/s] 1 ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: More Photographs

    Wow! The first picture is great! I love the gradual color change from light to dark. It really gives a nice touch to the photo. The one of the feild ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Photographs 2

    Hey there! These were beautiful! I absolutely love the first one! The clarity in it is brilliant. I love the one with the spiderweb. Even with a Canon SLR, I ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sunsets

    Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm June! This was such a sweet, sad poem. I really like the emotion you're putting in this with words. One thing!: with onlya sliver ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: 95% of America

    Hey there Flem! June here! Lately, I really like your poetry. The more I read it, the more I appreciate it. Contrary to what everyone else has said, I really ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Towers

    Hey there Dreamer! June here! I'm not sure if I've ever critiqued anything by you before aside from photography. Either way, I owe you a review :D. This was such ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Flowery Fishbowl Poetry

    Hey there Yoha! June here again! I really liked this piece! It has a gentle elegance to it, and flowed smoothly. I like the imagery that dances in this poem-- ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Corrupt a Wish 2

    Granted, but it's refurbished and it crashes as soon as you touch it. Sorry xD I wish I could go to Michigan...

    Feb 5, 2009


The best books... are those that tell you what you know already.
— George Orwell, 1984