Juniper

Hey there Scorpia! This is very good! I wish I could draw as well as this! :twisted: For shading, all you need to do is darken at the connecting lines ...

Question! What type of revision are you looking for? Are you looking for a critique like the type we do in other forums, or do we have permission to revise ...

Hi there Madel! June here! So! You have a really cool poem written here, you know that? There are just a few errors that I'm going to correct for you ...

Strangely, I seem to get my ideas as I'm doing something that's already got me preoccupied. It gets kind of annoying when I can't write them down write away. Or! ...

Hi there, Anna! June here! Wow, this poem is so beautiful. I would frame this and hang it on my wall-- seriously. It's sad! It's too distanced, but it's so ...

Hey there Oreo! I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you :). This is one of those sweet, natural poems that remind me alot of springtime. It ...

Hey there Luciano! June here! You have quite a nice base here, you should totally add to this :). The demanding tone to this pulls the reader in, and you ...

Hey there Eraqio! June here! Your poems are so impressive! They have a sweetness to them that I can't actually define. * * * Its quiet. • I really like ...

Also! Quick note, I forgot! Remember to put a space between your after your punctuation and a letter following it. See, just as I've done here.

Hi there, I'm June! I'm going to run over this for you :) Lucy has pointed out the two slight errors, I found, but I want to bring to your ...

Hi there meadow! I'm June! I'm going to run over this for you! 'Twas quite a hooking prologue! Very interesting, indeed. I like it so far! • Nitpicks: Warf rubbed ...

Hi there! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you :). I like your storyline so far! It's really interesting, and you can go really far with this ...

Hey Stori! June here! Your stories! Eek! *squeals excitedly* I love them! They're all so fantasy like and so cute! I love the part about the ears! And-- Nevermind xD. ...

Hey there Icaruss! June here! This is brilliant, and before I begin, I must say, I hope you continue this. This is basically flawless! The only slight error I've found ...

Hi there! June here! This piece really drew me in. You held my interest from start to finish. Before I continue with my-- pardon my lack of a better word-- ...