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Re: The Butterflies Dance No More
Hey there Evi! June here! Aw! This poem was so sweet! I like the imagery and how you "placed" yourself in this poem. You made yourself the focal point, but ...
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Re: Whirlpool of Secrets
Hey there! June here! Such a cute photo! I would suggest softening/blurring it a bit, and maybe turning it grey? :D The color is very slight here, and maybe would ...
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Re: A saint
Hey there! Such a wonderful photo! The only thing is the sun is directly behind the statue! That's giving it more of an inspirational touch, but if you had turned ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Photographs Again!
Beckiw! Beckiw! Your photos make me sigh happily! They're so breathtaking! Cuttteeey little robin! Was it raining then? I love the hills and the cabin in the Lake District. It ...
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Re: Sketches
Gracias for the review you two! Actually, on the back window, it's supposed to have a drastic slant like that. The car really does have intense sloping going on with ...
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Re: Rocks, Glass, Drawing on Jeans?
Hey Jon! June here! Such cool photographs! The first one isn't my favorite :D. The angle seems a bit too bland, and it's like... not centered or anything. That blank ...
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Re: Lies
Hey there, Gale! June here :). When I clicked this I wasn't really expecting anything like this. This is great :). I can really feel the tone that's set here; ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: What Happened.
Hey there Lauren Marie! I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you :). Before I begin, I want to mention to you that YWS has a 2:1 ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: A Test of Metal
Hey there Famous Author! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you! You began in a perfect rhythm, ending each line with a perfect rhyme. In some places, ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Sketches
A/N: [A friend of mine and I had a 30 minute drawing session together, where we named something for eachother to draw and had 10 minutes to draw each. We ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: photography! MY BEST YET!
Hey there! Quick note: This should be posted in Art and photography! -=- Very much gorgeous! I love the expression in all of them. The last one seems a bit ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
granted, but the sad thing is, you fall into a deep sleep, and if you wake up you can never sleep again. :D I wish for some chocolate :D
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: The User Below You...
I do! A really short one! TPBM hasn't eaten skittles this month.
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Midsummer Night's Dream Part 11
Hi Dude! June here! You have my permission to scream at me for taking so long to get to this. I am so sorry! I kept getting distracted and then ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Falling to Pieces (Death Metal)
Hey there Gluz! I think I promised you I would review this a little while back, but I only just remembered. The tone in this song for heavy metal is ...
Feb 5, 2009
