Juniper

Hey there JM! (I'll call you that until you give us a nickname to call you, dear :P) I'm June! I'm 15, and I guess if you call New York ...

Hey Desmerize! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you! Such a bittersweet poem! Here we go: and when i do just that, • Third line! The pronoun ...

Hey Karibbean Diva! Welcome to YWS! *shakes hand* Nice to meet you! I'm June, and I'm glad you joined. Generally, the people around here are pretty nice! I'm sure you'll ...

Hey Mike! Welcome to YWS! I'm June (as if you don't know that already... :P). Anywhoo! Vyper has touched on the 2:1 policy and the no chatspeak rule. The only ...

Hi Shina! Summer here! :P Shrouded by the shadows I take away the light. I incinerate your being. Yet you don't put up a fight. • Comma belongs after Yet ...

Hola Shina! I'm back! So! Basically, this is a work in progress, and I totally love the way it's progressing. Let's just point out a few things that are slightly ...

Hey Con! June here again! :D (By the way, these reviews pretty much fail since there's little to pick on here :P) The figure stood. In the fire’s light Draper ...

Hey Con! June here! Yay! This story looks super interesting! Here we go: Draper got off of his horse and looked around. The weathered storefronts and dry watering troughs told ...

I really wrote this in 50 seconds, so sorry. I hope it's alright xD Of course it is alright. Anyway! June here! You get my 100th review this month! Yay! ...

Hey Chips! Make sure you point out which stanza to put that in! :P June

Well! You have to consider what type of frog! Most of the time it's a "gribbit ribbit" or a "hik-ow" (I know XD I used to imitate bird calls and ...

Hi there! I'm June, and I am going to be your critic for today! Before I begin, Welcome to YWS! It's great to meet you. We have a 2:1 rule ...

Hi Happy-dear! June here! I haven't reviewed anything by you in ages! Anywhoo, here we go: • Okay! In your first stanza, the only thing that needs changing/fixing is your ...

Hey Stori/FOD! June here! Okay! I really, really like A Hundred Suns: Sepia, so, I figured I would probably enjoy the other parts. I enjoyed most of them, but this? ...

Hey there Sincerely, June here, and I am going to review this for you! I'll try not to be too harsh on you dear, here we go :D. I can't ...