Juniper

Hey there Thien (and Swottie!) Let's take a look at this! So, spelling and grammar were good as well as your other mechanics. However, we have a slight problem, dear. ...

Hey there! I'm June, and I'm your critic for the moment! Here we go! Okay! I'm kind of short on time here, so I can't go too indepth on this, ...

Demi! It's June! I believe I owe you reviews! *growls* You didn't tell me you posted anything new! Let's take a look at this: *looks* Hm, nothing major here, so ...

Hey Sol! It's June again! This is quite a beautiful poem. It's rather abstract, and it's weighty-- meaning that it's carrying a lot. There's not much to change, honestly. So, ...

Asha, watch the caps in reviews, please :).

Penguin dear! June here! I never noticed this poem before, but I'm glad I found it just now. This poem reminded me of the poem "Who Has Seen The Wind" ...

Hey there Diva! June here again! Aww *hugs* Such a sad poem, dear. Let's get to work. Okay, generally, it's not liked for you to use smilies in your writing, ...

Hi there break my heart! June here! Your poems are so sadly sweet, dear! There really isn't much to say about this. You have a perfect rhyme scheme throughout, a ...

Popster! June here! (Finally) ahem, let's get to work on this! Instead, I got some drunk who barely lived in my house. If you could call it a house…but that’s ...

Hey Dreamer 21! I'm June and I am going to review this for you :). How silly this is! I love how you turned something that is completely unfunny into ...

Hey there Sol! June here! Yay! Another poem by you! This was a nice, refreshing read. I absolutely love poems like this about nature. Like Alyssa said, your stanza length ...

Hi there Shauni! June here! Wow, spring already? How fortunate you are! Such pretty flowers! I love the monotony of the photo-- it's really easy on our eyes. There aren't ...

Hi there Timeless! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you. Such a touching poem with so much emotion and beautiful imagery in it! ...

Hey there Erratik! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you. This is simply beautiful! It's so peaceful-- like the person above me said, it's ...

Hey Desmerize! June here! I'm kind of short on time, so I'm not going to do a nitpicky line-by-line critique here. (Not that that would even be necessary, but ha ...