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Re: Los Campesinos (English)
Hey Eraqio! It's June again! Wow, this poem is beautiful! You really managed to capture the tone, the setting-- everything about the American people who are seldom remembered. Well done. ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Healing
Hey Write wat I want! June here! I love short poems! I wish more people would write them, haha. Most often, the shorter, the sweeter, because it takes a lot ...
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Re: My Mind is on a Train to Nowhere
Hey Bass Playing Freak! I'm June! This is a great photo! I love how the train tracks "pull" your eyes further and further into the photo, until we reach the ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Idiotic boyfriend
Hey there! Ah, so that was the point? Great! I'm glad I didn't misread you. Oh wow, you're silly. Really. But good point with that, dear. Adds a touch of ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: The Fairy's Gift (Edit I)
Hey there Rosey! You get my 350th review, and for this I get a purty, shiny blue star! Eek! :D She was still puzzling over it as she went to ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Idiotic boyfriend
Hey Darko! It's June again! Let's work on this ;). Before I begin... I'm confused. You say idiotic boyfriend, but you're referring to a she?? I think it should be ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Heartbeat
Hey Fire! It's June! Okay, I really don't have much to say about this-- I kind of fail at critiquing lyrics, but, I wanted to review this :). I think ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Clueless Cabby
Hey 100 x Stupid! June here! I don't remember if I've ever reviewed you before! It seems like I have, but I'm not sure. Anyway, let's start! So, this is ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Edward Cullen/Viagra Parody
Hey there Miss Cook! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, nice to meet you! YWS has a 2:1 policy rule, which means that before you post one thing of your work, ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Where are her mittens?
Hey there Vivacious! I'm June! Nice to meet you! Aww! This is cute! I love kittens, so this is totally one of my favorite types of poems, haha. So! I'm ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Koumpounophobia
Hey Tabitha! Nice work here, really! I love your art! I wish I could draw people like this xD. Anyway, let's take a look: The buttons look a bit unround-ish. ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: L.O.V.E
Hey there Rook! Welcome to YWS! Before I begin, I just want to let you know that YWS has a 2:1 policy, which means that before you post one piece ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: River
Meadow lark! It's June! Whoa, this is so breathtaking! I love how the photo draws your eyes in to the vanishing point of this all. It's so pretty! And the ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Random Snapshots
Hey Jon! It's June! Let's see, you're really into macro shots, eh? Very cool. Now, let's see if I can decipher what these are... 1. I have no idea? XD ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Nature of the Lies We Speak
Hey Myrcie! June here! Another wonderful, wonderful poem by you-- good job, this is really beautiful. To be brief, dear, I'm not so fond of the punctuation. I don't think ...
Feb 22, 2009
