Juniper

washboard tiles bathed in regret and the smell of death lingering among the freshwashed clothelines of detergent and memories encapsulated by the imagination of a single moment where the clock ...

Legend, To separate this from the multiples of blaming poems that circulate involving heartache, you need to add more to this. I would recommend adding some concrete imagery to describe ...

I think I need to start reviewing again to maintain my sanity.

:twisted: Are mods allowed to ban other mods again?

Hello Elinor! (Allow me to reiterate that I am overly critical nowadays. It may stem from the fact that college is getting to me in more ways than one) I ...

Hey, Soleil, I enjoy short poetry because it's usually a brilliant display of effort -- it takes a lot to fit a wonderful poem into such few words, and I ...

Hey there! June here! I admit that the color was a bit of a distraction, haha, and even though that's got nothing to do with the words, I recommend refraining ...

Hey there, Howler! This is quite an interesting piece. I like it, for the tone of it is quite hallmark-ish, although the words of it are not as sweet as ...

flootsie! June here! :) A tear gently fell down my cheek as I realized it was over. Does this happen simultaneously, or should it be "When I realized it was ...

Hey, Eric! I like this! I feel that there were a few things in it that could be improved, such as, as a few mentioned, the cohesion of this, but ...

Incognito, I want to be you when I grow up. This is marvelous. One of the best pieces of art I've seen on YWS in a long, long time. I ...

Awww! How cute is this! This is very well done! I love the sad-face of the puppy coupled with the mischievous look in it's eyes. It's so cute! I would ...

Goodness, these are impressive! The first three were breaktaking. From the composition to clarity and contrast, they really do a wonderful job at capturing a wintry atmosphere, and for that, ...

Hey! These are great! How long does it usually take you to draw one? My favorite of these is the third; I can't tell if it's just because I'm craning ...

Hey, Flower! This is impressive. You're really good at art. I would strengthen the outlines of this. Unless the camera detracts that much from the picture, the outer lines look ...