Juniper

Hi there, Ashley, June here, I believe that in the title and first line of this poem, the word you want to use is breathe, as in the act of ...

Hello, Tenyo, June here, On first read, this poem reminded me of a painting that I have of a rainy street in Paris. I'm not quite sure why, but I ...

Holy, whoa, Nate, this is a brilliant change. I love it.

Hi, Dante! I'm June, your reviewer for the moment. :) As with any piece of writing, you've room for improvement in this poem. This is the type of poem that ...

Conradio! So, I've been an absentee for about half a year now, and I think it's fair to say that I'm rusty in all the wrong places at reviewing. Criticizing ...

Hey there, What a cute thing that fellow is! You say a baby lamb, but aren't all lambs babies, anyway? :P It's a very cute snapshot, but as far as ...

Try an image host site such as imageshack or photobucket. Upload your picture to there and copy the IMG link here, and it should work. :) Junipar

(Forgive me for redundancy if something of this sort exists somewhere, but...) Happy Birthday, grandpa Nate! The old jokes expired last year, so no canes or walkers this time (even ...

Kylan, There were only a few things that stood out to me as worthy of a correctional eye in this narrative, which I'll point out momentarily. I think you did ...

Kylan, Like most of your works go, there's a sense of relative familiarity in this poem that almost any reader can relate to, and I think that's one of the ...

Jon, I've been reading a lot of classic American poets, like T.S Elliot, e. e. cummings, and others that one would commonly find in a schoolbook anthology. I find that ...

[April 1st - Butterfly Legs] I've walked this far and back on legs borrowed from a fragile wing who stepped our remorse down to twice the span and spent the ...

I'm making a mess for the month of April, and here I shall place the bravest remains.

I'm going to disagree with the above posters and say that the simplicity of this gains my appreciation. While I do feel that this could be improved by placing an ...

Rossie! In one of my first memories ever, Just say "One of my earliest memories". ;) The worst reaction I've ever had from a hearing person was discomfort. From a ...