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Re: Leaving
Hey Autumn, June here, I think that this poem has a nice load of potential packed into it, but there are several aspects of it that have dragged it down, ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: I Am The Walking Dead
Hey there, June here, Nice work on this. I think that you still have room and potential to build and expand with this. I enjoy the theme, the unliving living ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: maitolaituri
Demsy! I wrote a review and YWS ate the beginning. :( Anyway, I was saying, that this poem makes me happy for plenty of reasons -- one being that you're ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Deep Within
Hi, Harmony girl! June here, I enjoyed how you kept an even line length throughout the poem. I'm not sure that bringing them to a full stop at the end ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: I am ROME
Good day, Kevo, I'm June, I found this piece inspiring. The entire thing came together and whispered of hope and happy things, and I think that as far as the ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: My baby Kronus
Hey there, I stand under the impression that poems to release feelings are a good way to ventilate at times, as it gives us something else to focus on without ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Rose
Hey Eliza, Interesting picture. :) As Alteran mentioned up there, the leaves on the right pull our eyes further into the photo than your focal point, the flower, needs us ...
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Re: Apollo & Daphne
Prism! This is a wonderful piece of art. I can imagine endless hours of hard work and frustration behind such brilliance. :D Anyway, critiques - - His ear reaches a ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Buildings
Jenthura, I absolutely love your artwork. I never have any criticism for it, and it's absolutely always magnificent. Your personal style is prominent in these, and I think you can ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hey there, I prefer your first edited version to this one. I think the sunlight should be in the corner behind her, and should be pointed towards her feet, because ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Goddess of the Cosmos
Hey there, I like this photo, but I can't tell how much of it you edited. I think it would be a good idea to always include a link and ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Old Stuff
Vivela -- The sketch of the grump is an excellent piece from what I can see of it. I think you should define the edges more, however, and add some ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: I heart you.
Hey, Mimi! It's been a while since I reviewed something of yours. I'm not too sure what to say about this photo. I enjoy photos with light and glass and ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: A few of my photos
Hey there, Water Lily, The first three of these photos don't strike me as very unique or interesting. Self portraits are pretty hard to get as interesting because the major ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Alice
Nice work here, Classy. :) After watching the latest Alice in Wonderland movie, the Cheshire cat looks odd to me if it isn't blue and dust. :P You did an ...
Jun 20, 2010
