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  • Poetry » Romantic, Horror Re: consume me

    This poem is a captivating and raw portrayal of desire, blending physical and emotional hunger into a powerful expression of longing. The speaker's need for connection is depicted as an ...

    Sep 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: The Child I Buried

    This poem delivers an emotionally charged and deeply introspective exploration of suffering, mental health, and the complexity of survival. The narrative reveals a profound sense of invisibility and f

    Sep 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Your name is pressed on my collar

    This poem beautifully and heartbreakingly captures the depth of unconditional love and loyalty, using the metaphor of a dog’s devotion to its owner as a powerful analogy for the speaker's ...

    Sep 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: kodokushi

    The poem Kodokushi by Lovestrike is a haunting exploration of loneliness, futility, and the search for meaning. Through its use of historical and modern references, the poem connects the collective ...

    Sep 27, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Doofus Detectives Ch 2 : Modern Day Mummy

    This chapter from Doofus Detectives blends elements of humor, mystery, and suspense, and it does so with a light, engaging tone. The setting is vividly described, starting with the luxurious, ...

    Sep 26, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Chapter 1: At the airport

    Your passage effectively describes the events leading up to boarding a plane for an exciting trip to France, but there are some areas where the writing could be enhanced for ...

    Sep 26, 2024
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Moist Chunks

    The poem humorously explores the visceral reactions elicited by the words "moist" and "chunks," both of which often provoke strong negative sentiments in many people. The imagery is vivid and ...

    Sep 26, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: To Vesper (A Poem)

    This poem captures the emotional complexity of unrequited love and the tension between friendship and romantic longing. It delicately balances the speaker’s admiration for their crush with the painf

    Sep 26, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Supraorbital

    The poem Supraorbital explores themes of intimacy, discovery, and the passage of time within a relationship. Here are some key elements to consider in the review: 1. Title and Theme ...

    Sep 26, 2024


The opposite of belonging is fitting in.
— Dr. Brené Brown