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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Look and listen

    Look at me! What do you see? Do you see a hero? A saint? Or, am I so terrifying that I make grown men faint? Am I beautiful, like a ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Fireworks

    I liked this poem. In school this year i read a novel called "The Absolutely True Diaries of a Part-Time Indian." Talk about a book that will make you cry! ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: This is not a Love Poem

    I loved it! It reminds of home during the summer time. My fun summers that were care free and awesome. It reminds me of being outside in the middle of ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Lost, Chapter 1

    I really liked the story! It flowed nicely, and had good dialogue. Prepare for nitpicking! You have some phrases of dialogue that are ended incorrectly. Some phrases of dialogue are ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Forget.

    When it comes to books or poetry, I'm hardcore. I never cry, scream, I barely even giggle. But, your story made me want to cry and cry and cry. It ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Mortal Door

    Preface: It is almost certain that all Earth mortals believe that they are special. That in someway, somehow they are different from everybody else. Normally you see their talents when ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Ol' Man John's fortune

    Is it really that bad?

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello all Hunger Games Freaks

    I LOVE THE HUNGER GAMES! I just finished the third book, and it was awesome!

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Love Hurts

    I don't know about the rest of the world, but I like poems that are short, sweet and to the point. Normally, when I read poems I'm spending 20 minuets ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: No More Judging

    That is so true! I absolutely LOVED your poem. I know how you feel when it comes to judging people. I get judged a lot myself, and truth be told ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Everlasting War: Pre-Recorded Times Chapter 1

    I really enjoyed your story. Your style of writing reminds me of how a good friend of mine writes. Very formal, which is a good thing. I enjoy it when ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: No More Judging

    That is so true!

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Ol' Man John's fortune

    “Hey Sam?” Clara asked. “How much money do you got?” I rummaged through all my trouser pockets and plopped the change on the restaurant's table. “Uh… ‘Bout, seven pennies in ...

    Jul 11, 2011


okay I think I need to grab some nachos
— BluesClues