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I really liked it. It was short and sweet and still managed to have some beauty. Keep on writing!

I loved it! It made me want to cry! But a lot of the time you seem to be using he's instead of his. It flows better. But, other than ...

I liked it. It was very simple, but in poetry that's not always a bad thing. It sounds sweet and sincere, which is what I liked most about it. Keep ...

I really liked it. I myself write to get away from the world, but now the way you do. Please! Keep writing!

My mind was doing so well. The paper was filling with words so perfectly. But, suddenly, it just stops. No warning, no "heads up," not even a way to turn ...

The story reminded me of the Hunger games! Which is an awesome novel. I really liked it. Keep on writing!

I really liked the story. It was beautiful, and I was inspired by it. Keep on writing!

I love the puppy. The sheep and cows were cool, but my favorite is the puppy.

I was a little confused with the hush, hush thing going on there. Or is the reason for that a hush, hush topic ; ). Anyways, loved it! I liked ...

NOW I GET IT! I have one friend that cuts because her father abused her over one summer in Texas. She developed P.T.S.D. (post traumatic stress disorder), and she used ...

It was supposed to mean that he abuses her and then just leaves right after he finishes.

Normally I figure out if poem was written by a professional by how long it takes me to figure out what it's actually saying. Your poem took me awhile, so ...

I LOVED this story! mainly because I'm a dancer myself. I enjoyed how it takes place in France, and all the ballet terms were used, and spelled correctly. There are ...

I've had a good number of friends who were on the verge of doing such a thing. It's scary to me, but to them it almost seems like the only ...

I liked it! It gave me a very depressed feeling, which I think that's what you were going for. It was short, though. It would have been nice if you ...