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Re: (150 WORDS) Contest Submission
Um... My first thought was that this was a book report. Then, I thought about the freedom of slaves. Then, I was worried that it was about something dirty. So, ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Hell's Rollercoaster
WOW! That's an amazing poem. I loved it, but not about the part about me going to Hell now that I read this awesome poem! Eh, C'est la vais. (I ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Memories
Okay, when writing a sentience you always say it in one line, and not split it between two lines. For example: He was so sweet. (Not) He was so sweet. ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Hello
Normally I like sweet and simple, but this one seemed a little TOO simple, if ya know what I mean. I think you should take the poem and stretch it ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Piece's of My freakin' Mind
C'est super! J'adore ca! But, I think the story didn't flow as nicely as I thought it would. Each new stanza didn't really seem to have anything in common with ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Beyond Looks
I liked it. It was simple, yet powerful, and those are always the best kind of poems.
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)
I loved it! I couldn't stop reading!!! So, did he die? You left a lot of questions unanswered, which is a good thing. when you're writing you your reader to ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: I'm a newbie, so, like, rawr and stuff. xD
Hi! I really like your user name! I like watermelon too :D ! Welcome to the site! I hope you love it here. I know I do!! rawr to you ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: I am a Woman
YOU GO GIRL!!!!!! GIRL POWER!!!!!! I loved this poem! I'm with you girl! It all made sense, and it sends a message to all that just because we're woman, doesn't ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
I was cleaning the yard, when my mom called saying she found this website, and she e-mailed it to me. So I checked it out, and not even five minuets ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: That's Hot.
I was hilarious! I couldn't stop giggling. It flowed wonderfully, and I couldn't ask you to change a thing! Keep on writing!
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Bonjour, hola, hiya! Whatever you normally say.
(Insert greeting here) I'm June3, and I'm only that name because the computer wouldn't let me be Junie B. Jones. :( Anyways, I'm fourteen and I REALLY want to be ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Heey, I'm New(:
Welcome to the sight! You're really gonna love it here
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Just some of my pictures.
I loved them they all so pretty!
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: YWS is the Best
Cute. Just plain cute. I LOVE YWS!
Jul 13, 2011
