June3

I liked this poem, it was cute. But, it didn't get really passionate until the last stanza. I can see the hints of romance intertwined in this piece, but in ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It keep me reading, and wanting more at the end. However, there was one stanza that seemed a little awkward Anything else would be boring, ...

I learned your story, I know how it goes, You move to a new state, A new city, A new life, You find a girl, You think she looks pretty, ...

I really enjoyed the flow of this piece, I liked how the ryming add even more flow (I'm awestruck because my ryming is terrible). Also, this was a very powerful ...

I had tears in my eyes when I finished reading this. It was amazing! A very nice prolouge it was organized perfectly, ad you've set yourself up for a novel ...

Hello! I will be reviewing your story this evening. I really enjoyed this poem, it was really deep. Just one little nit- pick. The air you were looking for is ...

Wow! That was an awesome read!

Okay, I loved this poem, but it was way too short. You need some more detail in here, I liked the analogy with the shoes. But, describe the girl. What ...

I love how this poem flows. It made me read it like a bedtime story book (if that makes any sense), but I love how it rhymes. The poem seemed ...

That was really powerful. And, it gives you a perfect idea of what the on-lookers were thinking when that all happened. It was kind of short though, it would be ...

To all those people, who were in the air, and saved our Capital, But didn't make it. To all those people, who were working hard, and making sure our nation ...

Strangely every piece I've been reading lately I've been liking. This was a good poem, and I liked the way you described the pain which lead to the cutting. Be ...

I really liked the word choice and the description you used in this piece. It sounded meaningful, and it hooked me right in. A couple nit picks: “Be patient in ...

I have to admit. When I looked at the title, I didn't immediately think of Anne Frank. I thought of cats, and once I started reading, I started crying. The ...

I really enjoyed this piece! It rhymed well, and it had a mice flow. It reminded me of this song by Greenday (yes, Hobbes listens to Greenday) called "Brain Stew" ...