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Thank you very much Suzanne I will dwell on it. And thank you too LilyReagan That is also a piece i liked as well. :)

I really liked it. The concept was enjoyable and I liked your word choice and descriptions. Though I think you got confusing in places and some sentence fluency was bumpy. ...

Yeah, I didn't mean don't review it at all though. I just want you to understand me before you examine me. I wasn't really trying to explain my poem I ...

Pre-script: In my eyes, poetry is the words your mind best forms of what your heart is trying to say. I don't believe your heart really has much punctuation for ...

Why, hello! I am, as you can obviously see, new to this land of electric ink. I hope it is a joyous place to live and grow. You can call ...

I wrote this at the beginning of 7th grade. It has no punctuation and a rough rhyme scheme. But for never writting poetry before this, I think it's sadly ok. ...

This poem's not about a movie It's about the way I feel Something 'bout the scream Of agony and rage that may seem A little terrifying And may leave some ...

I actually like this poem. I'm not sure everyone else caught that last line. I would ahve to say that the beginning had me shocked at it's audacity yet was ...

Panic at the rodeo pinned it bullseye. Good rhyme scheme and the imagery speaks well. The she's are numerous but, when I think about it, they fit pretty well. A ...

Yeah, I thought so too. I wrote this a LONG time ago. I'm trying to start from the beginning of my writing to now (which will take forever, Over 200 ...

I'm suprised there aren't other comments! this piece moved me like jazz and I love jazz. Your tone is smooth and it pulls upon my depths. The dance you perform ...

Tears of my own exhausted soul Blood of my own broken heart, The red on my hands The black on my lips My poison tongue And deafened ears my knuckles ...

Hey, I'm Cheyne (don't think you know it. It's pronounced Shane) I am not a woman I am a man (just so there is no confusion with my name. I ...