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100/10 MASTAPEEECCCEEEE ChieRynn is a genius the likes of which we haven't seen since Joyce!

Thanks so much for the review Acerstorm! And seeing as you're somewhat new to YWS, welcome =3 I really never thought about tying each section into one another, I just ...

Thanks so much for dropping by and giving a review =3 It really does mean a lot. I'm not even quite sure why I didn't use quotation marks, something about ...

Thanks for dropping by and giving it a review. =3

Thanks so much for going through these Dest. I really appreciate it. I'm afraid there isn't a part three planned or anything. I just wrote this story kind of on ...

Thanks for the review, Dest! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

I didn't even think of that. The timeline that is. The whole loaf of bread stealing is a bit of a medieval fiction cliche isn't it? I'll try to get ...

Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to look over what you mentioned.

Thanks for stopping by Lavvie, I'll try to work on what you recommended. :)

Hey, thanks for the review. I was pretty concerned this story wasn't going to appeal to anyone but myself, so hearing that you liked it put a big grin on ...

I think you've missed my point, dear chap. The reader understands what triggers Sam's emotional shift, I was simply saying that we should be given a little more time and ...

I liked it. It was creative, and very sweet. =3

We'll see if the muse strikes. Who wants me to tackle themes close to my heart, like "what if we seek riches too much?" "what if my faith is wrong?" ...

I could write a haiku about that instead. "Clickbait Title" it'll be called.

Idk really know either, if I'm being honest. Part of it was kind of the clickbait titles that I was seeing all over YWS, and part was just that, shock ...