JulietWrites

Me again! Good to get back into the swing of things now that the holidays are over. I'll keep R&Ring! Sasha Rosakos was an athletic, good-natured woman. She was thirty-two, ...

Hey! I'm just going to go paragraph by paragraph with this review. Let's get started! The man’s lumpy voice reminded Dell of curdled milk. The only person Dell knew that ...

Hey! Wow! It's not often that a story strikes me as much as this one did. The visual imagery and the unique concept are really something. I like how you ...

Hey! I'm just going to tell you the things I like and the things you could work on. Let's get started! I absolutely love all the symbolism in this story. ...

Hi! I need to get reviewing more, so let me tackle this chapter. I think you did an excellent job with imagery and visual storytelling. Your characters are very real, ...

Hi! I've been trying to review more, so now is a good place to start. “Josh, you have to be quiet,” Santana warned. “We don’t know what or who lives ...

Hi again! My friend eggeggegg should be helping me review one of your other chapters. We're great friends from school. My name is Raphael Cortez, he thought. I am from ...

Alright! First review. In order to make these a little easier to read, I'm only going to keep the paragraphs I have a statement to make on. Let's get started! ...

Hi! I'm sorry for not reviewing this sooner, but it's just been a really busy week. I can do about 2-3 reviews per day, but today I started kind of ...

This is a great story. My only problems are- well, it's a bit stereotypical, isn't it? The over religious, god-fearing latino/Hispanic young boy? And his name, "Raphael Cortez", I mean, ...

This is a very interesting poem. My only critiques are that it's a little overdramatic. "Dogs are our gods". I don't think that many people (or dogs!) feel that way. ...

Wow! This poem is so- so- full of feeling! It's positively saturated with passion. I can totally feel how you do! Just try not to let yourself fall into a ...

Excellent use of word portrayal. I can really feel the situation! My two critiques are: I feel like the story should be longer. You're giving a lot of visual imagery, ...