JuliaNicole

Hey! My first impression of this poem is that it seems to be unfinished. I feel like it has the potential to be very striking and poignant, but only if ...

Oh no, don't apologize! I really value your opinion here. I'm trying to use my story for good and translate my experiences into something that can affect other people as ...

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my story and write such a detailed review! I really appreciate your input and will keep your criticism in mind. ...

Thank you very much! I really appreciate the encouragement. Now that you mention it, though, it could definitely be a lot more developed, especially Nicole's condition and the events of ...