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Re: all i remember is your birthday (well, happy birthday, anyway)
hi rae! tysm for the review !!! i love to hear that people get sorta emotional reading my work haha ^^
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Re: all i remember is your birthday (well, happy birthday, anyway)
aahh hii!! so happy i get to be your first review, welcome to YWS !! 💕 ty for your input ! i’m glad you caught the irony in there - ...
Oct 11 -
Re: all i remember is your birthday (well, happy birthday, anyway)
halloooo ty for the review, I’m glad you enjoyed reading my poem
Oct 11 -
Re: all i remember is your birthday (well, happy birthday, anyway)
hii Queenie !!! thanks for the review, hope you get that star soon~ ^^
Oct 11 -
Re: all i remember is your birthday (well, happy birthday, anyway)
hi firespy !!! tysm for the review :) i wrote this from personal experience with the intention of making the relationship between the narrator and the other person seem intimate, ...
Oct 11 -
Re: Chapter 3 | Alexei
ahh hi creeper ! i always love to see you lurking by my chapters
Oct 7 -
Re: Chapter 3 | Alexei
tysmm for the review !!!! yes haha the ‘a farewell to sprin’ was a typo for spring, I’ve re-edited it lol also I’m so glad you pointed out the name ...
Oct 7 -
Re: fy enw i yw // my name is
ohhh i see haha !! that makes sense : D what a cool thing to write a poem about XD
Sep 25 -
Re: Chapter 3 | Alexei
i wanted to add an awesome-sauce first line for Alexei’s 1st chapter but I haven’t come up with one yet so here you are
Sep 23 -
Re: manna
hello Juke here! as not only a Christian myself but also as a fellow writer, this is … absolutely amazing. the word choice is v. clear and upfront eye candy; ...
Sep 23 -
Re: Prologue
hi HMMHhehe !! first off lemme say that this review warmed my heart, and it’s true of your reviews of Chap. 1 and 2 as well, so thank you so ...
Sep 21 -
Re: Empathy
hey!! i’m back … to finally write the review I said I’d do weeks ago :’) first of all, the imagery and composition of this flows v. well. I think ...
Sep 18 -
Re: Prologue
hey, Aislynn !!! thanks so much for the review ! “On that note, I think my main suggestion would be to watch how much information you introduce at once. In ...
Sep 11 -
Re: Prologue
thank you so much for the S’mores review !!! i’m glad you enjoyed reading this :)
Sep 11 -
Re: Prologue
hey Tikaya ! my worst nightmare =D (jk i loved reading this review) …so let’s get straight into it! “The gold threads on the cover look v pretty, how did ...
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