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Re: Who We Are
Who We Are By Judith G. When you're a kid you have many dreams. You want to be famous, you want to be great. When you grow up and see ...
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: Teen Angst and Rebellious Mistakes
Ok, so it needs some work, It didn't feel like a poem, more like lyrics to Rihanna's song. Just like some others mentioned, some of the stuff in your poem ...
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: Bad Girls Need Love Too
Yep, grandmas are in! I think you're story moves from place to place soo quickly, it's hard to stay with the story. I love istories that are more descriptive, but ...
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: Cement Sealed Lips
I love the poem, and the the words used
Aug 28, 2008