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Re: Not an Angel
Not an Angel All I wanted was for you to see me, To listen to me just one time. To have your gaze fall upon me and see The way ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: My Superman
Hey, I though it was a really nice and sweet poem, I really liked that you called him superman, because, aside from what the poem says, you give away he ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Pompeii
I think it was an awesome poem, i could visualize everything with so much clarity , and it definitely brought me to another place. that's the thing I most admired ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Red Ribbons
Red Ribbons She sees her Soft white skin, The soft blue veins That mark a way Beneath her skin In her pale white wrist, She feels her pulse It’s pressure ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: An Insight Into A Teenager's Mind
Great poem i really liked it You blame it on the person who knew all along I think that maybe it should say: who knew IT all along Yes, as ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: 3 AM Speculation.
I really liked this poem Every night interrupt my steady sleep Though I do think that something's missing in between this two lines. what interrupted the steady sleep? other than ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Reflection
I really liked this, it definitely doesn't end how i was expecting it too. I loved the lines Like a child in a department store, hidden among the many rows ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: (unnamed)
I think it's really pretty and that it flows really well, it really does seem like it came right out of your head, natural. It's short but it still delivers ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: nothing
Hi, i think this is very good, it had a lot of emotions and it's really centered, though i do think you need to polish it up. you can maybe ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Forever
Thank you so much to all of your comments! as you can see I'm a Newbie, so any advice and help you can give me will be very appreciated. thank ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
I really like this! i thinks it's really brave and honest specially because a lot of us are faced with this sort of situations and i think this is essentially ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Feelings I can't Ignore
This reminds me so much of me! I really enjoyed it, specially because i thinks it's so honest. I really liked it =)
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Finding Me, finding you
Wow, this is really great, it really just flows, and the unexpected twist at the end just amazes me. Beautiful.
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Forever
She covers her eyes and avoids to see. She whispers his name in dreams in her sleep. She takes his hand and presses it to her cheek. She tells him ...
Jan 16, 2011
