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Tigerlilly, This is amazing. This is awful. I don't know how to respond. You took infanticide, abortion, and dressed it in beautiful words. You took a problem in society that ...
Feb 1, 2016
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Hey Storygirl! I really liked this piece. It was honest, realistic, and funny. I loved how playful Brendon was. It does a lot to establish his personality. Jenna, Taylor, and ...
Dec 30, 2015
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Hey Felistia! I love the scenes you've displayed here. Your imagery is on point. :) I especially like the description "Forests carpet the banks, their green leaves trailing in the ...
Nov 28, 2015
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YAY!! I love this one too! I like the history of their world, very creative. ;) And again, as with the last chapter, the imagery is very vivid and creative. ...
Nov 24, 2015
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Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure
Re: BIRTHMARKED - Synopsis and Chapter One (incomplete)
Hey there C! Welcome to YWS. I hope you love it here. Let me just say . . . this beginning really grabbed me. It's a very striking idea. I ...
Nov 23, 2015
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Hi Kratos! Welcome to YWS! I hope you love it here as much as I do. I'm going to review this piece of yours and give you a few pointers ...
Nov 10, 2015
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Hey Jared, This is a wonderful piece, jam-packed with imagery and graceful diction. The rhyme scheme is free-feeling and doesn't feel forced at all, a very hard level to achieve. ...
Jul 18, 2015
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Hey there! I didn't get all of this because my science skills are still dim, but I did manage to recognize some of the references and they cracked me up. ...
Jul 18, 2015
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Hey Isabel, Welcome to YWS! This was an exciting piece, full of imagery and suspense. I could see the story clearly in my mind and could follow it easily, but ...
Jun 5, 2015
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Hi Skies! Chapter 2!!!! This story is really building up tension. Lettie's sick, Juno's been taken hostage, and the Canids somehow have way more food than they should have. Awesome! ...
Jun 5, 2015
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Hey Bee! Welcome to YWS!!!! This sounds like it will be a really fun, adventurous read. I don't have much of a story to go off of yet, since this ...
Jun 4, 2015
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Hey Skies, I really loved the imagination in this piece. You aren't recycling overused ideas here; this is a completely new concept to me. Kudos to you! I think its ...
Jun 4, 2015
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Hey CJ! Welcome to YWS. I don't know very much about politics, but I'm here to give you a few pointers. This was an extremely good speech. I would definitely ...
May 16, 2015
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I really liked this. Honestly, whenever I walk by a mirror my reflection scares me. Not because I'm a scary-looking person or anything, but because it's just not me. I ...
May 10, 2015
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Hey Arathorth, This is absolutely beautiful. It's amazing that you can find so much symbolism and beauty in something so simple. I especially liked that you withheld what you were ...
May 8, 2015
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