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Is that any better? (By the way, how do you indent a paragraph??) Thanks for your help!

Thanks! I appreciate your help. I'm really new to all this, however, so I'm still trying to figure out how to do stuff. I'll mess around and see if I ...

The Dirt-Colored Pony “I’m scared of that horse, Mom!” Megan groaned from under her pillow. “Why did you buy her anyway? She’ll never replace Bo.” Her mother flipped on the ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! I liked your peice as a whole, and it made me actually read it, instead of the barely skimming over words like I usually do. I ...

I like this peice, and I agree it has the ring of traditional fairytales. It made me think back to my old Grimm's Fairy Tales that I read so much ...

Hey, great poem! This really connected with me because I used to be quite shy. You really captured the feeling well, bringing me back to those (unpleasant) days when I ...

Very interesting story! I liked the dialogue because you used authentic voices, which made the entire scene seem much more real. The beginning (running through the forest away from an ...

Where don't I write?? Usually, I get weird inspiration in lots of different places, and if I'm lucky, there's a pen handy that I can use to tatoo my ideas ...

I'm not sure how it'd be treated, but I can assure you everyone in the house would be in a manic state, considering people of that era were deathly afraid ...

From my experience, anyone can be made into an enemy in a person's head, not matter how nice they are. I don't have any suggestions for external reaction, but she ...

Soccer Soccer (Did I mention soccer?) Running European Handball Riding fast horses (especially ones that aren't swaybacked and ugly) Ice skating and not falling on my face Playing tackle football ...

Soccer Soccer (Did I mention soccer?) Running European Handball Riding fast horses (especially ones that aren't swaybacked and ugly) Ice skating and not falling on my face Playing tackle football ...

My favorite: "Surround yourself with people better than you are." I might've paraphrased it a bit, because I've had one of those long, brain frying days where I try to ...