JoyceSparrows

This is just a very general comment. I think that you should put your comments that you wrote at the end of the poem at the beginning, just because when ...

To answer your question, it did happen a long long time ago. By the time of this story's setting which would be sometime in the medieval/dark ages, 5th to 15th ...

I just noticed that I wrote the word "and" where I meant "an". There's nothing worse than correcting someone else's typos when you realized that you have made your own. ...

Is this for Snoink's bad writting contest? (If it's not I'm sorry.)

Thanks a lot for helping me with the punctuation. I really appreciate it! I have always pronounced shone like the name Shawn... obviously I have been saying it wrong my ...

I enjoyed reading this. I really liked the style of writing that you used. I'm sorry for not giving you any constructive criticism, but I'm new at this and I ...