Jongosi

I understand exactly what you're talking about. I love hip hop, all sorts of hip hop, although I just feel like underground rap is better than mainstream 'hip hop'. As ...

I enjoyed that. I’ve never really been good at figuring out metaphors and themes and such, but here goes: First, I’m not sure about the choice of second person narrative. ...

Hello. My name is Michael Klint. I don’t know why, but I somehow feel the need to tell you about myself. I’ve never done anything like this. I don’t even ...

I did read this. I wish I hadn’t. How dare ye make fun of me fake bri’ish accent?

That was great! I love the feeling you put into the story, the words are all so precise that it gets the emotion across brilliantly. The main character’s voice is ...

Nice start! Your writing was good, a bit long-winded at times but I like your style. I found the story really got interesting when you introduced the mysterious woman. I'm ...

This is much harder than it seems. Here goes: "You're late" I sigh. Death grins.

That was good. I like where you’re going with this. If this is part of a larger piece it’s spot on but if it’s a full story I urge you ...

This is exactly what I need to do. I hate it when my internal editor starts tearing up a first draft before it's even finished. I'm going to print this ...

Hi fellow newbies! I’m Jongosi. I’m looking forward to meeting some awesome folks, reading (and critiquing) some great stories and just having an overall blast. Hit me up if you ...