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Re: Welcome New Members!
Hi im Jonathan Witts and i come from Hertfordshire England
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: The Decline Of Life
Thanks for the critique im very sorry to hear about your mothers friends son
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: The Decline Of Beauty
why thankyou good sir :)
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: The Decline Of Beauty
Thanks for the critique as for that line that was a total mess up on my part i was meant to put arm in there lol and the object i ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: The Decline Of Beauty
I rated this r because some people could find parts offensive it does include some nazi stuff so please do not read if you find this offensive if not ENJOY!!!!! ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Chapman Has a Gun
Chapman Has a Gun Chapman has a gun, (quite a funny line actually to open on i enjoyed it) tucked safely in his coat. He hides in the shadows of ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: How We're Spending Friday Night...
So here we all sit. (opens the poem up nicely and gives a setting) The television dancing in colored lights before our eyes. (i really liked this line it gives ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Fear
The fear is not frightening. It itself fears that no one fears. It's under the bed because it's frightened. This part was awesome! all the text flows together very well ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: The Decline Of Life
The Decline Of Life The midwife staring with eyes of a hawk. Cold wisps and sounds of joy. Enter my lungs and ear drums. The vibrations on the car ride ...
Aug 23, 2008
