Jon

i personally do not like any of those titles but if it is about three greek people and a journey or quest it should be called "The Road To Destiny" ...

what?! edit edit edit edit, way too much slang and chit chat! [edited by Adam_Atlantian to restore the shape of the forum.]

i enjoyed reading this poem and how it sybolized that special moments do not last forever, they "wilt" and go. other than a couple of mis word uses in the ...

[quote]Before him people had mistaken her for my older sister. you should have a comma after him a couple of lines down you us came it should be come over ...

i read it twice to get the understanding of it but to make it moe clear the first time you should go back and change a couple of words. I ...

Chapter one The Canaby sisters The witches Madeline, Rose, and Sarah Canaby formed a circle raising their right hands and began shouting their names MADELINE, a blue beam of sparkling ...

this poem shouted death and despair, although i personally do not like poems like this, it was well written and it said something that made you think good job -jon-

i liked it i was a strong poem and it said something