Jon

Chapter Two The Witch Hunter’s Town The midnight air was cool and crisp as the Canaby sisters flew high above the clouds. They had been flying silently for at least ...

i am going to forget all of the grammer, mostly because everyone else did it for me, this poem made mesmile, i think this is the funniest poem i have ...

well, good poem and a deep meaning, now to review: i think the way you have the poem set up should change because it was a little hard to read. ...

Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 5:25 am Post subject: Shadow Dancing -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- First poem after a long break. Be gentle, but firm. ** On

well, demeter and eilmer said it all, i cant find any thing else with your poem, but it did lack emotion yes there was emotion but it was more latent, ...

this poem had a lot of history to it and was well kind of boring, just like in stories you have to have a hook. also it was a bit ...

like every one else that has responded, i don't know much about limericks either. from what i read it is OK but at the end where it says " he ...

this was a very good poem, and the ending was great, dare i say phenomonal? this poem although good had some error, here they are : in the third stanza ...

A vow of hope A leap of faith This world is alive, We all go out We all come in This world is to big to miss With all it's ...

Winter time snow clouds float in the air snow falls gently with lots of care falling far to reach the cold ground the wind carries it without a sound arctic ...

i liked what you wrote but ( here comes the critisizing ) um, it was a little random and all over the place with rome, paris, new york, and florida. ...

If you spend all of your present thinking about the future you’ll have no present, and then no future.

You were my life, my joy I have no courage, but boy I reach down deep, to my soul And find that I don’t need you anymore My heart will ...

this was a very sloppy mess, oh and wacth your language!!!!!!! i would consider re-doing this little article,it didn't seem like you put much time or effort into it, are ...

quoted from kagerou453 Just because someone claims something to be cliche doesn't necessarily make it true. I've read stories that have been taken from the authors' own lives that have ...