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much much better, you sound human :D

Chapter four The Village With a Mystery The Canaby sisters landed in a shanty village, it was a village like they’ve never seen before, witches and wizards roamed the cobble ...

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2/10 i don't like that car at all sorry

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hi, and welcome to YWS! if you have any questions pm me, that means to message me :D anyway to the critique i thought this poem was very confusing because ...

hi, i did like this story and unlike the other two i will nit pick, i'm not afraid :D i had a problem with the characters at the begining because ...

I need one One true love To guide my way My way through love A love so great It confuses the heart A heart that loves Is a heart that ...

this poem is very good , there is a couple of little minor mistakes but i won't say them because this was a good poem, i liked the way you ...

hi this is your first reply and i bet your happy to finally see a reply, now on to the critique i thought it could use more of a hook, ...

hey, i liked this poem, but it was kind of a slap in the face saying all guys only want a pretty face although most do. i really did like ...

Chapter Three The Witches, The Gifts, And The Staffs The Canaby sisters stood looking at the witches, and the witches looking at them. “Who are you?” asked one of the ...

[quote] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The cherry-blossom petals get rid of the - are falling like tears into my hair. This is not just some lovers' t

this poem, for me was just o.k., it wasn't great, and i'm not saying that because it was short. yes it was about the trees blossoming and rain, but i ...

i do not believe in this satanic message, although it was a little eccentric that the music said that backwards, but i also agree with the first post saying when ...