Jon

in my portfolio under Canaby Witches chapters 0ne - Five i would really appreciate it! :D

thankyou every one for your great crits i have already started to make changes and keep following the story line! :D

banned for having a dancing kitten

Monkey Pulp!!!!!! i can't read this like this and it is probably why people have not been responding to it, you have to scroll for a minute to just get ...

An evening star glistening bright---------why would a star be showing at sunset, this throws off the poem time The sunset fades to blackest night Flowers close their delicate petals----- not ...

MOMENT Myarii smiled as the minute snake coiled itself around her fingers and blinked its big eyes at her. "He's so cute. What's his name?" SAID WHO, YOU HAVE SPECIFY ...

A fleeting Moment Or a long troubled time These are the hardships The hardships of time We all endure We all go past But remeber our rigors Will never last ...

i liked these two but i liked the lolly pop better that the smiley face, i think that there should have been more to the lolly pop. good work! ---Jon---

weird how much our appearance change as we get older huh

Love’s risk It starts with a smile Then grows to a kiss Traveling miles, To feel true bliss. People fantasize, Of rare true love That never dies That’s strongly wove. ...

firestarter is known for being a post aholic

Kayla, michelle? hobbies- reading, writing, swimming, singing, and watching tv eye color -- blue hair color-- brown can you guess my name?

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hey Alexa, my name is Jon and welcome to YWS, you will find that this is a community filled with many different people and you will fit right in with ...

hi riley, and welcome to YWS, this is a really great site that let's you be you and furthermore improve your writing skills. i hope, i know you will enjoy ...