Jon

Does magic really exist, i mean if you think about it, where DO the stories come from and all of the other unexplained things. your jobs is to come up ...

hey i am here as you requested, however, since this is a short piece and not full of mistakes i will mainly focus on the characters that you have and ...

North, East, South, and West The wind shall come with it's best Blowing, gusting, shaking the trees Making people weak at their knees. Trees squeal at it's might The force ...

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done, next?

hi rascalover, i am here by your request and i have read the whole thing. i noticed that the other two people have critiqued on you grammar and choice of ...

known for having all blue stars in which I envy :D

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black sachico? is known for having a chinese woman on a computer chair scooting out of view :D

alright you beat it out of me In my portfolio under "Canaby Witches" is five delicious chapters waiting to be read, please comment at least and tell me what you ...

Anyway, what I will critique: Mostly anything! :D [u]What I specialize in Dialougue Emotion Fantasy Detail Poetry Realism Structure I'm looking to help! ---Jon--- :D

This has gone of for four months now.---- I THINK THAT YOU SHOULD TAKE AWAY THE PERIOD AND ADD ON "IT WAS JULY" TO MAKE A LONGER SENTENCE, THAT SENTENCE ...

free critiques from me, just pm me the details of where they are and which ones they are i will take anything but i love fantasy fiction the best! ---Jon---

Is someone who loves you supposed to go and have sex with someone else? No? --- THE NO? SHOULDN'T BE HERE, IT MAKES THE SENTENCE SOUND ODD :D See I ...