Jon

interesting but, i agree with all others in the fact that it was just ok or it was interesting. although i did like the repitition! overall this was a unique ...

i liked this drawing, although it was not my favorite on here so far, i liked it. i really have nothing to say other than good job i'm no help ...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i just recognized you're new here on YWS, this is a very goo site for writers, so welcome and have fun now onto your po

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If you ask me what is wrong--- comma? I won't know what to say If you ask what I want, I still will meet you with silence.-- this line breaks ...

i agree with chocoholic on every thing except that she didn't like the mini couper, i on the other hand loved it, that is one of my favorite cars!!!!! the ...

i really don't know how you did it but i liked it good job i really have nothing to crit ---Jon--- :D

i loved all of these except where the dog is barking and you took a photo of it. my very favorites was the cat in the first picture and the ...

it's fantasy, but it's good, so please with sprinkles on top :lol: in my portfolio under Canaby Witches is five delicious chapters to read, just tell me if you like ...

done jared, it was great!!!!!!! next???

hi big bad bear, i'm here as you requested and i have to say, brilliant just brilliant, since you don't want us to crit the grammar, i won't, although i ...

banned for having a blueberry for an avatar

hey, i saw the first one a foot right? anyway it was just ok, maybe you could but the drawing on a darker back ground? the hand, ahh the hand ...

hey i liked this i liked the way the bird was just watching the fish practically saying "your lunch" but i think you should make the fish more worried, maybe ...

Sight whirls legs turn to jelly.---- don't think you need a . Down the throat of a whale and into the belly--- good rhyme put in a . Black swirls ...