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i liked all of this it was very good and well done, i don't have really anything to crit good job! ---Jon--- :D

When you walk through the door my world seems wonderful. When I have a bad day your beauty--- this stops the flow of things makes my heart flutter like there ...

i agree with all of the other people in that it had a really good message and i will remember it for a long time. i really have nothing to ...

awh, it's sad, why did the little baby have to die? anyway this is a very good poem and i gave it a gold star, this was absolutly amazing and ...

i liked this poem but it was really all too sudden i think to make it better you should add a little more to it. i have a question why ...

hey, good job i thought that this was very detailed although i thought the hair might use a little work because it wasn't very "real looking" i think to make ...

i have nothing to really say because everyone already said it but i will say that i liked the message it gave that even if your poor it dosn't matter ...