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thanks everyone, they were all helpful, i tried the hero machine thing and i really didn't like it :( . but thanks for the try, suz, i will try that, ...

Late morning, I logged into MSN, conversation pops up. --- MAYBE YOU COULD SAY "IT WAS LATE MORNING WHEN I WAS ON MSN WHEN A CONVERSATION POPPED UP" I THINK ...

does anyone know an Internet site i could go to to make my characters and then print them out? i mean where i can go to get as much detail ...

yes Galatea, i agree but what i was saying is that it's nice to use more of what you think opposed to documents. documents are fine but there was way ...

In the future sgt salt, the debate forum is used for your own opinion and not what other people say for you and it was really long, also you had ...

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now could you do chapters 2-5 you only did the one thanks ---Jon--- :D

done and done next?

I'm here as requested and since i can't really go over the mistakes because everyone else got to them i will just go over the whole piece and tell you ...

surreal I've always been very partial to the idea of using cloning to grow brain dead humans, so that we have a constant supply of vital organs and blood for ...

I personally think that cloning should be allowed, geneticist are now experimenting with animals and actually growing human organs inside of them so if anyone ever needs a heart then ...

hi lady helena, and welcome to YWS, you will find that this is a wonderful site to improve your writing skills and make new friends. As a rule on this ...

hey it's me as requested, i think it was OK at first glance like all others said but like everyone else said too was that the fingernails need working on ...

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people!, i need things to critique, please