Jon

review count-- 56 i have never been to chat because i didn't know how to get on, ironically, today i just found out how to and now i want it ...

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The first one has like a bajallion critiques, but the last one has none. which is why I only critiqued the second one, I did read the first one and ...

done jared, but i only did the second because you said the first had a lot of reviews and whatever i said would have been redundant. I did read it ...

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nothing in return, thanks i'm done and it was very interesting next please

here as requested, anyway i will go paragraph by paragraph and crit it then i will go over characters and the overall peice, and don't worry i will be as ...

done amber, next please ---Jon---

by your request i have come, i'm not much of a art critique but for the first two i have to say i didn't like them. for the last one ...

The pig lets out noxious fumes that terrify mankind and suffocate bananas! Poop goes the weasel! Your butt burns all week! END! Never! Don't forget flying squirrel monkeys and bluberry

done, next please ---Jon--- :D

The pig lets out noxious fumes that terrify mankind and suffocate bananas! Poop goes the weasel! Your butt burns all week! END! Never! Don't forget flying