Jon

Hey BBB, This poem was just O.K. for me, I don't see how me critiquing this is going to help because you have a lot of critiques already. However my ...

Possible Title? -- The Canaby Sisters I have Six chapters on here and one in my computer still. I will be posting it when i am finished, although that might ...

Likelihood of you being FEMALE is 93% Likelihood of you being MALE is 7% I thought I was a male! Those scores are pretty bad :( Ah well, Its who ...

This was Brilliant Kris! I have nothing to add because Of the other post, sorry. I really felt throughout the entire poem what the person was feeling, I felt the ...

My mother met Lee Greenwood when it was her birthday, she went to a concert and went on stage, gave him flowers, and kissed him on his cheek. I don't ...

I've been In school for only four days and I'm buried in homework and long-term projects! Ah well... ---Jon--- :D

but the russians actually landed there first. not us. The russians were the first to orbit the world in space, however the americans were the first to land on the ...

Is that pick out the lines or something on PSP or Photoshop? -- It was Photoshop Mitchel musso? I've never been told that before! Thanks! :lol: Anyway i have the ...

When she was first born.

Thanks Guys, Bella-- It isn't heatmap, Although it does look like it! :D Glad you like it! ---Jon---

I went back to school today! Ugh... ---Jon--- :D

Listen and hear the earth breathe, its heartbeat along with yours. 'It's' needs an apostrophe, Earth should be capitalized, and the second line doesn't flow with the first one. And ...

Rascalover-- done Next please, although i might not get to it right away, I start school tommorrow! Leave them here and I'll get to them! ---Jon--- :D

Aw! Well I'm not much of a photography person but I'll try, I like the silkiness of the coat and how it is so different from the red pillow underneath. ...