Jon

. (This poem equals fail. So . I post it on YWS in hopes that it may -- one day -- not equal fail.) Your words drip off my tongue ...

Hey, Tiff! (Sorry about yesterday night, my computer spazzed. >.< I was going to do it then, but yeah...) Anyway, I liked this! However, I did have some issues: absent ...

A Rainbow colored sky (with clouds) Maybe with leaf-less trees in black outline on the bottom. Text: Cue the Magic

Thank you Bond and Trident! Trident -- I get what you mean about evoking a more violent action from the narrator to get something return. (Thank you for that Idea!) ...

The sky was with rain that day and I was at the wicked tree. I knelt and began to pray like so many had before me. ~ The blackened branches ...

It’s a giant abyss The world beneath me (I think you should add in a : after 'me') A universe of souls Always revolving (Nice imagery! :D ) Down here ...

I celebrate natured roads with a tinge d of with Human s . :D I made those changes...the way you had it was oddly worded. Also, it just sounded off. ...

You're asking what happened to 1 and 2? (I don't believe I posted them...maybe. O_O ) Cracking Calcium The butterfly doesn't transform -- only our perception. It's slowly finding its ...

the washedout streets \ "washed - out"? beside s an isolated Nix the "s". way-out - vision I think if you add one more "-" it'd make the rythm more ...

I didn’t meet any of the curious stares,( ; instead of comma? ) just sat down and got out a piece of paper. I Let them think what they liked. ...

~ It's like running through an archway, But, once you're through -- you miss what you had. That's the thing though, you almost don't. So you go on your way ...

1. I actually like this one...the angle is nice, and it's a nice, clear picture! 2. I don't like this one as much as the first. You have to make ...

The year has revealed a lot of things, and I'm glad to have spent some of it here. I want to keep this short and sweet, so I will end ...

~ "Distant Voice of Saron Rinii" ~ They move to disturb me -- The Unreachables of form. In this darkness I cannot see, My sanity I shall mourn. ~ Why ...

I just wrote a long, big thing explaining my views. It didn't show up. :( Short version: Badges: I don't think it would help the issue of "status". Example: (Molly)"I ...