Jon

“You can hide but you can’t run.”(-cough- I thought the saying went, "You can run but you can't hide."? ) Not with this story.. They can hide but they can't ...

*CoughChp.8Cough* oops :D Chp. nine too? ---Jon--- :D

Chapter Nine Ruby’s Revenge “Hurry” Mary panted “We must leave, immediately!” She ran over to the Canaby sisters with her rag – sheik tunic flapping behind her. She stood behind ...

Welcome Alex, you are considered a writer whe all you want to do when you wake up is write. When You smile during the most boring class when thinking of ...

I would love some, I need to post something and do not have the points:( I guess ... I could ... Work! boohoohoohoo:( ---Jon--- :D

I'm with Jabber. XD really though, i need a break from everything! ---Jon--- :D

People like that are the real heroes, they see more horrendous things then we'll probably ever see and they work so we don't. For all the people who have died ...

Thanks sarah, sooooo much! This must have taken hours and i really do appreciate it. As i was reading your critique i had to laugh because, And please don't tell ...

Maya! that's the girl i was talking about June! Dania Ramirez to be exact! ---Jon--- :D

--- Chapter Eight be harsh! Oh and Chapter 7 too please! but don't leave me in tears. :D ---Jon--- :D Thankyou!

Candles all raised high, against the growing dark. I like these two verses because They show a powerful scene and it makes me want to read more. However while good ...

Thank you june! You just made my day! I will go back and correct those things and make it better! I'm glad you like it and keep those points! haha ...

(Chapter Eight of Eight) Fantasy you're welcome to read the first seven too, but no review on those, just eight thanks! thankyou ---Jon--- :D

Chapter Eight Taking Down Ruby “Madeline, are you absolutely sure Ruby is back” Sarah said in a serious, half-scared voice. “Sarah, did you not just see me have the biggest ...

That was freaky Deafwriter! Really though it was great, it made actually get chills! ---Jon--- :D