Jon

I'm wondering why anyone hasn't voted Nate in yet, Hmm. You really deserve this Nate, not that its much by the nomination/appearanceof name. :D (I can has more than one ...

Thank you june for the crit. I will explain thispoem so all my words are in the right order and make sense. The memories are the scars, meaning they'll never ...

I concur Monki! Springrain is a very nice person and gives me a confidence boost everytime we talk in some way shape or form! You deserve being mentioned June! ---Jon--- ...

Check that site out first. Anyway, if your poetry seems like it just doesn't want to flow, here are some of my own tips to get the poem flowing'. 1. ...

The scars run deep, In your eyes they show. Those scars are yours to keep, You’ve earned them, now go. Please save us the pain, It will only hurt us ...

I knew you would be an instructor! was i the force driving that, perhaps? ---Jon--- :D Thankyou

Done Sureal! Next? ---Jon--- :D

Sureal, this was very good! It flowed along nicely and i found very few things that could have been improved: The sunlight, filtered through the bright canopy of leaves above, ...

Lord Anzius, you're done! Will work on Chp. 1 a little later sureal! I'm excited to read it because i never have and I've been seeing it everywhere on here, ...

Look, no, look deeper. It would sound better like this, "Look, okay, now look deeper." Into the deepest holes of hell, there lies the home of demons. "In the deepest ...

I posted this months ago! yes, I am a little, erm, sensitive. :oops: ---Jon--- :D

What i probably need to do: Well, do great reviews! This is where you guys come in, I have revived my "will review for food" so, go there please! Any ...

Me! Chapter 8 and 9, in my portfolio under, "Canaby witches" thanks ---Jon--- :D

Done about two/three months ago with those. :D Back in business, maybe... ---Jon--- :D

That's okay, And i see this was posted at 11:47 ? you late night owl you :D ---Jon--- :D